Ashleigh Hostler

[ashleigh1112]

Name: Ashleigh Hostler
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Magical Background: Pureblood
Magical Affiliation: Light
Wand:

11inches, yew, dragon heartstring

Physical Description:

Ashleigh is about 5'11" with light brown, waist-length hair. She's always smiling and has good facial features. Her eyes are blue with unobvious hints of grey in them. She tends to wear goth or emo clothing as opposed to robes

Personality:

She's bouncy yet quiet. Often she finds that people around her are laughing although it's not occured to her that anything funny has been said. She's timid and is always looked after her now-husband, Mark, as he is very protective of her. She sometimes stays quiet for long periods of time, like her husband, when she's thinking of him.

Family:

Mark Hostler- husband
Mary Hostler - Daughter
Lily Hostler - Daughter
John Hostler - Son
Alex Hostler - Son
Lucie Hill - Sister
Amelia Humpherys - Sister
Josh Hill - Brother-in-Law
Tom Hostler - Brother-in-Law

History:

Ashleigh was born into a family with two foster brothers. She didn't know this until she was 9 years old. Her brothers, Mark and Tom had been orphaned a few months after Mark's birth, so him and his brother, Tom, moved in with very good family friends, the Humphrys. Ashleigh, was used to help Mark and Tom believe they were a part of the family. Mark was 3 and Tom was 4 when she was born. 2 and a half years later Lucie was born. Then when Ashleigh was 9, Amelia was born. The family were very happy. Then Ashleigh fell in love with Mark when she was 13 .Both of them were at Hogwarts. Then disaster struck. Voldemort's uprising. Tom, Mark and Ashleigh were home-schooled along with Lucie until they had learnt as much magic as the Humpheries knew. When Ashleigh was almost 15, Mark had asked her to be his girlfriend. She had said yes. But the war started when Ashleigh was 15. The two were separated when they were trying to get away from the big cities, Ashleigh disappearing with her sisters and mother whilst Mark was pulled away with his brother and foster father. Although the two didn't see each other, they wrote to each other constantly, using the muggle mail. Her mother had tried convincing Ashleigh to give up, and to break up with Mark. She ignored her and continued writing to her love. The war ended when Ashleigh was twenty and ready to leave home. Mark was 23. She sent him a letter, telling him to meet her in London. The two were finally reunited, having endered 5 years without each other. They rented a muggle apartment until Ashleigh was 22. Two weeks before Christmas, Mark proposed to Her. She said yes. In advance, Mark had arranged the wedding and all Ashleigh had to do was get a dress. She did so and on Christmas Day, the two were married. Lucie, now being 17, had a surprise for them. She was marrying Josh Hill, her boyfriend of 5 years. He was 21. They'd also been separated. Ashleigh and Mark attended the wedding happily, Josh being both mark and Ashleigh's friend. 3 years later there was some exciting news in the families. Ashleigh was pregnant. Identical twins, Mary and Lily were born. 1 year later Ashleigh was pregnant again. Alex, named after one of their friends who'd died during the war from poor living conditions, was born. Mark and Ashleigh decided that their apartment was too small for three children. Now the family is quite happy in their little house in the country.

Special Powers:

none

Other:

Nothing to add

[Professor Hermione Potter]

Same thing for your husband's bio, your history is a bit off. You would have made it through 5th year before Hogwarts was closed due to Voldemort's uprising. Until you were 20, you would have been in the middle of the war. So that might affect some of your backstory.

Just a sidenote, but twins are rather rare so it's not likely you would have 2 sets in a row. (Oh and you should know that your bio isn't that smooth as it's written as a mixture of your husband's bio and your own. You don't need to include their history too, just your own.

[ashleigh1112]

Modified 1/12/07

[Professor Hermione Potter]

Much better, though you might want to check the end of that history. If you were 22 when he proposed, 3 years later would be when you were 25. So you wouldn't have had the kids until just before you turned 26. Let alone 2 years later for when the 3rd child would have been born.