Elemondo Magicka

[Eledmondo Magicka]

Name: Elemondo Magicka
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Magical Background: Pure blood
Magical Affiliation: Light
Wand:

A Long Irish Blackthorn casing with a dragon heart string core

Physical Description:

Short black hair ,brown eyes ,strong and tall and broad shoulders .

Personality:

friendly,responsible,caring, quiet,smart and quite perceptive. However I can be hard to read sometimes.

Family:

My family are a great bunch my mum Milly Magicka
and my dad Jojo magicka my brother Melvin the so called only one with adequate divination powers.
and thats it.We all descend from Ireland.

History:

Not that notable a few little unfortunate accidents such as blowing the house up twice petrifying the cat and lighting the rug on fire occasionally. But apart from than a solid magical education built over hard years of work.My learning started from a very young age.

As I grew up I found magic natural.I believe I definitely put in the hard yards.I haven't traveled much. I must admit divination is not my forte I just can't do it for some reason it is a family thing i assume. Apart from that I also really hate big long lectures. My family shifted from Ireland when I grew older and our house in Ireland was near a place called blank point which is the name of a tall mountain.

In Ireland we found it hard to make a living because there was always those cheapskates that would try to rip you off or leave you for dead. At one point in my life crime got so bad that people were disappearing week after week luckily I never did though.

During that year my mother and I were walking home and there was this strange man who was spying on us in the safety of the shadows.Until That night when mum and I were looking home and he jumped out at us and threatened us with a wand my mum quickly wove a spell and soon i saw a person be set alight. To this day I feel as though he is still watching me.

Other:

I am reasonably good at defensive spells and I can be resourceful if necessary.

[Professor Hermione Potter]

You need to expound upon your magical history at school. Blowing up the house and other incidents of accidental magic isn't enough to get you into a magical university as it seems you want to do. You also need to put your characters age. Put simply, in this bio about your character, I feel like I know nothing.

[Eledmondo Magicka]

I have partially expanded on my character so take a look.

cheers
Eledmondo

[Professor Hermione Potter]

Your bio seems to be violating Article II of the rules in regard to the role-play atmosphere. You've made your character pretty much perfect. He's a talented musician, an award-winning undefeated duelist, and a master potion maker. What are his flaws? He can't be talented or perfect at everything.

[Eledmondo Magicka]

I have changed my original post Hermione.
I have added in some flaws.